Grammar
and punctuation are hard concepts to learn and teach. Maybe the use
of techniques aren't terribly hard themselves, but explaining exactly
how to use them and when to use them is another story. My main goal
for this semester is to master the use of punctuation and be able to
explain each comma, semi-colon, colon, etc., to my future students
with ease.
The
DASH
A common misconception is that the dash and hyphen are
the same thing. While the dash and hyphen definitely do not serve the
same purpose, they do have one thing in common: they cause confusion.
Example: "And yet, when the car was finally
delivered—nearly three months after it
was ordered—she decided she no longer wanted it, leaving the dealer
with an oddly equipped car that would be difficult to sell.”
This
“em dash” is used in place of the comma. The sentence could also
read: “And yet, when the car was
finally delivered, nearly three months
after it was ordered, she
decided she no longer wanted it, leaving the dealer with an oddly
equipped car that would be difficult to sell.”
Em dashes can be used in place of parenthesis and colons as well. The
em dash can also be used in place of letters in a word. An example of
this is: “Mr. J-- testified that the defendant yelled at the
woman.”
COMMAS
Commas are probably one of the most used punctuation, but maybe also
the most misunderstood. Commas are so common and useful that
sometimes they are overused. Do we need, a comma, in every situation?
It's important to understand when commas are needed and when they're
just unnecessary.
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SENTENCE
STRUCTURE
How boring is it to read a paragraph with all the same
sentence structure? How hard is it to stay engaged when there is no
variety? How can one change their sentence patterns to keep readers
interested? Exactly; sentence structure is an important skill to
master in order to produce effective writing.
Example: “Men and women, young and old, looked forward to the New Yam Festival because it began the season of plenty-the new year. On the last night before the festival, yams of the old year were all disposed of by those who still had them. The new year must begin with tasty, fresh yams and not the shriveled and fibrous crop of the previous year. All cooking pots, calabashes and wooden bowls were throughly washed, especially wooden mortar in which yam was pounded.” - Things Fall Apart (p.36).
Example: “Men and women, young and old, looked forward to the New Yam Festival because it began the season of plenty-the new year. On the last night before the festival, yams of the old year were all disposed of by those who still had them. The new year must begin with tasty, fresh yams and not the shriveled and fibrous crop of the previous year. All cooking pots, calabashes and wooden bowls were throughly washed, especially wooden mortar in which yam was pounded.” - Things Fall Apart (p.36).
This
excerpt from “Things Fall Apart” is effectively written because
the sentences all vary in length, structure, and word strength. If
the author, Chinua Achebe, would have had a list as every sentence,
or no versatility/punctuation at all, the paragraph wouldn't have
been as great.
Favorite
sentence structures
Semi-colon
use- the use of semi-colons can be exceptionally beautiful; they add
a touch of skill that not everyone can master, including me.
Ellipsis-
not every punctuation can take the place of an ellipsis. They add a
drawn out explanation, almost like a surprise that you can't really
get from a comma, dash, or even exclamation point.
Mikah,
ReplyDeleteExcellent post! Great job reflecting on the punctuation while using them. One place where you might consider a period/intentional fragment instead of a semicolon:
"How can one change their sentence patterns to keep readers interested? Exactly. Sentence structure is an important skill to master in order to produce effective writing."
You had a semicolon before, but the "exactly" has more emphasis when you, well, emphasize the fact that it is an intentional fragment--rather than try to combine it with another sentence using a semicolon.
Beth
Yes! That would most definitely add more emphasis on my "exactly" point. Thank you for your input!
DeleteBest, Mikah